Page Thirteen

25th May 2015, 3:26 PM in Prologue
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zoido 25th May 2015, 3:26 PM edit delete
zoido
Oh my god I'm UPDATING?! Yeah, hiatus over! I took off some time to make a ton of cosmetic improvements and I hope that shows in this page! Sorry it took so long, and thanks for all your awesome comments and support!

I just reached 50 CF subs and I don't know how to celebrate but, hey! I'll think of something! Again, thank you! I'm deeply in love with each of you <3

Also, get hype for page 14 cause NEW CHARACTERS!
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HeSerpenty 25th May 2015, 3:36 PM edit delete reply
HeSerpenty
Oohh I love his expressions in this page! The bottom 3 panels I like especially!
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:25 PM edit delete reply
zoido
Thank you! It took longer than it should have to get them looking just right, glad they turned out well!!
MadJak91 25th May 2015, 3:45 PM edit delete reply
MadJak91
I love this! :D
This is the perfect "adventure begins" kind of page. Pumped and all.
A whole world lies beyond the giant wall that secluded him.
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:26 PM edit delete reply
zoido
Yay! Thank you!

And what an adventure he's about to embark on :'D
JammyTheBirb 25th May 2015, 3:54 PM edit delete reply
JammyTheBirb
Aaaaa really cool!
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:26 PM edit delete reply
zoido
Thank you~! <3
Zanreo 25th May 2015, 3:57 PM edit delete reply
Zanreo
Aaaand IT'S BACK!
Very nice! Love his face in those last panels!
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:27 PM edit delete reply
zoido
SO GOOD TO BE BACK! Thank you! Those were fun to draw. :D
Seabiscuit 25th May 2015, 4:40 PM edit delete reply
Seabiscuit
Eeee! An update!:D
Oh my god, James...Just, James. He's so adorable when he's all anxious! And woah- THAT ANGRY FACE!O: Awesome! James can do badass too!
(Woah- Congrats on 50 subs! Definitely well earned! :D)
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:32 PM edit delete reply
zoido
I shouldn't have made James so cute, he's ruining my life/relationship. Don't let the fangs fool you, he's still a giant softy.

THANK YOU! I gotta do something to celebrate :I
kat_oz 25th May 2015, 4:52 PM edit delete reply
kat_oz
Love the new cosmetics, the shading, the expressions are great and the variation in angles is looking really nice. Glad to see that you're back ^^
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:33 PM edit delete reply
zoido
Thank you so, so much! I'm glad all the practice/work paid off! That means so much~!
Guest 25th May 2015, 8:31 PM edit delete reply
Great work with the expressions here. :D Can't wait to see what happens next!
zoido 25th May 2015, 8:34 PM edit delete reply
zoido
Thank you! <3

Here's a hint: fuckboys
Donkaccino 25th May 2015, 9:57 PM edit delete reply
Donkaccino
You did an amazing job with the shading and the emotions! Gah! Those angry expressions of his are so badass. XD
zoido 25th May 2015, 10:09 PM edit delete reply
zoido
Wow, thank you!! He's kind of a badass by nature, but tries really hard not to be~
Epiale 25th May 2015, 9:58 PM edit delete reply
Epiale
OMG this page looks awesome! :D

Seriously James looks amazing, he's adorable and badass all at once, and that glare is perfect. Everything looks so wonderful and I can't wait to see the next page. <3
zoido 25th May 2015, 10:11 PM edit delete reply
zoido
THANK YOU! ;o;

Too bad the next page contains significant amounts of "Guys Who Aren't James" and it's going to be that for a little while and I hope people don't get pissed D:
Lilbluebox 26th May 2015, 12:09 AM edit delete reply
LOOK AT HOW CUTE JAMES IS

I can't. He's just too adorable. Even when he's mad/determined he's adorable. The cutie-face~

He also has giant hands. And I'm kind of in love with his teeth. :]


zoido 26th May 2015, 1:14 AM edit delete reply
zoido
He needs to be stopped.
Miaubol 26th May 2015, 3:42 AM edit delete reply
Miaubol
I just love all these different expressions on this and the previous page. Quite an emotional roller coaster there, but the determined "you know what, I'm not letting this scare me"-look in the last panel tells me he handles it well. ;)

and yes, he *is* cute :D
zoido 28th May 2015, 11:51 AM edit delete reply
zoido
Those are both the best AND worst kinds of roller coasters!

Lately I've been on the lookout for Nicolas Cage 'cause James is a NATIONAL TREASURE.
ProfEtheric 28th May 2015, 11:40 AM edit delete reply
ProfEtheric
First of all, GREAT work on James's face!

Second, CONGRATULATIONS on 50 subs! Yay! Seriously, you deserve every one, and so many more!

Third: NEW CHARACTERS! Always exciting!
zoido 28th May 2015, 11:51 AM edit delete reply
zoido
DUUUUUUUUUUUDE!!! <3 THANK YOU~!

Yeah, it's exciting until you actually MEET them! These two... haha, damn.
VulturesUnderTheMoon 8th Jun 2015, 6:02 PM edit delete reply
VulturesUnderTheMoon
Oh my goodness!!! I love this comic so much already!
Subbed <3
zoido 9th Jun 2015, 12:42 AM edit delete reply
zoido
THAT MAKES ME SO HAPPY!! THANK YOU!! <3 Welcome to the comic, hope you like violence and sadness :'D
VulturesUnderTheMoon 9th Jun 2015, 5:29 PM edit delete reply
VulturesUnderTheMoon
Trust me! I'm an expert at Violence and Sadness XD
HapyCow 26th Jun 2015, 1:26 AM edit delete reply
HapyCow
All right, finally read it! :D I love the dark tone of the comic, as well as the design of the cave dwellers..very cool stuff. I'm also a huge fan of pages like this that's just building the atmosphere. Great work!
zoido 26th Jun 2015, 3:35 AM edit delete reply
zoido
Oh, gosh, thank you!! I'm very flattered!! :D
the_quiller 26th Jun 2015, 10:59 PM edit delete reply
the_quiller
Yet another comic I could have sworn I already subscribed to, but ended up not being D8

I love this so much already that this one month gap between this page and the next page makes me rather sad.

I've already trawled through the forums looking for all your extra doodles and art, haha.

But for this beautiful story, I'm willing to wait even longer. Take this 5 rating and a +1 to your sub count, it's more than well deserved!
zoido 27th Jun 2015, 2:16 AM edit delete reply
zoido
Oh my gosh, thank you! Aaah~ :'D

I'm supposed to update very soon, I have just SO MUCH planned for this dumb comic. Like I said up there, it's going through some major changes that are still in effect... So it just takes a while... x_x

Again, thank you!!! I should try to update more, aaaugh!
Leafa 28th Jun 2015, 9:37 AM edit delete reply
Leafa
Really enjoyed reading this through (loooong overdue, I think I've been subbed for a while and just hadn't got around to ACTUALLY READING) What can I say, clearly I like pointy eared monster outcasts. Sorry if i spammed you with comments along the way, I thought I'd make up for lost time.
zoido 29th Jun 2015, 12:50 AM edit delete reply
zoido
No, no! I love the comments! Thank you so, so much!!

And pointy-eared monster outcasts are my favourite outcasts, so I know where'you're coming from ;D